Tuesday, January 26, 2016

Critique of my kindle scout page?


I am not receiving nominations yet (it has been about seven days now) and I am wondering of pros/cons of anything with my page, whether it is the synopsis, first sentence of chapter, first chapters themselves, cover art, or anything else.
https://kindlescout.amazon.com/p/1YO5NM47PMVLO
Thank you very much for any input.

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