Monday, January 21, 2013

Your thoughts on this poem?

This is completely free style. This is suppose to describe the stage where a couple starts to fall in love, but will not say "I love you" yet. I'm not sure how to end it, though.

I wanted to express to you, in writing, how this year came off to such a delightful start. Adorned with a genuine smile is how I first noticed you. Lucky was I for there was someone to help kindle a flame as we were both too shy to say anything. Your affectionate and thoughtful nature drew me even closer towards you. You continue to enthrall me with your brilliant mind. I cherish what we have at hand.
>>> Your thoughts on this poem?