Let me be the one you dream about
let me be the one you cant breath w/o
let me be your first
let me be the bee that owns your honey
let me share my deep thoughts with yours
let me adore and admire
let me kindle a fire to your heart
allow our bodies to make shadow puppets in the dark
let us embark
let me find out how deep your soul is
before i discover how deep it takes me to create a zygote
let me be your dreams in flesh
let me join you in death
let us be the bullets in the same chamber
let me become your boyfriend and not a stranger
>>> Hows my love poem? is it good or bad? whats your opinion?