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3rd Degree Burns Feel So Good.
I'm going to set myself ablaze.
Flare up with destruction, creation.
A whirlwind of carefully placed imagination.
An inferno of memememe
I'm again ravaging the hillsides in a furious, hot mess.
Scorching your eyes and heart with my scarred hands of charcoal
and flame.
I do it all.
I write with magma ink
and paint with gasoline.
Then I burn it up.
My soul chasing the fruits of the Earth with a fiery vengeance
and a blackened desire for passion.
I have set myself ablaze, follow me with your
kindling souls and oxygen.
Fuel me.
Feed me.
Set your life on fire.
Seek those who fan your flames.
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